So its the 25th post way awesome!!! I was thinking it deserves something special.
The first part of one of my stories should be good enough i say.
Note of Caution it is a tiny bit racey....
“Andy lets go to the beach” said Melinda. “Sure baby” replied Andrew. They set off to the beach in Andrew’s red Ferrari. When they got there no one else was there. “Why is the beach so empty?” asked Melinda. “Well sweetie pie, it is November and not everyone loves the beach as much as you do” replied Andrew. “I guess the less people here the more fun we can have” she answered as she ran towards the water while removing her clothes. She splashed around in the freezing water and asked “Are you coming in baby or are you going to stand there all day?” Before she was finished speaking, he had started running straight for her. The next thing she knew, he kicked off his shoes and jumped into the water fully clothed. “Catch me if you can” she yelled and started swimming away. She knew she never stood a chance. Andrew had been on the swim team in high school and college and had won many medals. He caught her in a matter of seconds. “I am claiming my prize” he said right before he kissed her. Melinda broke off the kiss and dunked him under the water. Sputtering for breath, he asked “What was that for?” “We never agreed to terms” she replied sweetly. He kissed her again. “I love you” she said. “I love you, more” he replied before kissing her again. “I want you naked” she said. “I want to be naked” he replied as he pulled his shirt over his head. She undid his belt and pulled his pants and boxers off in one swift motion. She reached down to touch him. “Beep, Beep, Beep.”
Andrew jumped awake and smacked his alarm to turn it off.All My Love,
Tabitha
P.S. If you want more comment!!!! I check all the time and never have comments, so the more comments the more I will write. ;)
4 comments:
ooooooo this chapter makes me go all tingley EVERY TIME i read it. i love it love it love it. its amazing... you maybe the next Stephanie Meyers Andrew is just AMAZING!! i love him almost as much as i love edward. this is going to be the LONGEST comment ever. i will give constructive critism and all the complements I can possibly NOT think of reading this. IT SO AMAZING!!
okay serious serious...
racey-ness is awesome and its only a dream so...
you made it realistic and we all got ripped when it turned out only to be a dream. but you should really describe Andrew and Melinda - we know that they're hot, but give us details in the next chapter...
Andrew slammed the alarm clock. Damn it! he said to himself - pushing his slick brown hair into perfect little curves.
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Melinda slowly rose with the sunlight brushing on her pillow. she brushed her luxurious brown hair into a tight ponytail; her sidebangs fell haphazardly across her face.
GET IT??? i actually have made it 7 days w/o being depressed!!! its so amazing. and dare i say that i believe in tru love???
All my love, Asait.
PS: can I post this??? facebook me. <3s.
PSS: my bro's b-day u know his email?? I'll give it to you. *<:-) [birthday smile]
awesome ideas for me to write into my story thanks so much...7 days and true love wow what has happened to you! ;) ...i have been depressed lately...grr.....yes you can post this
YESS!!! omigosh, isn't it amazing? i'm sorry bout ur sitch, and i hope all goes well. and, yes, edward cullen can MAKE you believe in true love...
rar.
all my love,
A.
Love this story so far!!
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